Friday, 27 October 2017

Zara's Writing

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https://docs.google.com/document/d/145qcdeKJV62rE1b3Z5b96nfsH5Qgl4r_8ma_MVaR99w/edit
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  1. Anonymous10 November 2017 at 11:20

    Hey Zara,
    My name is Mikaela and I am a Year 7 intermediate student attending St Pius X School. I really like how you described and explained how astronauts eat while at space. I think that your writing was good but could’ve been better by proof reading to identify the Spelling and Punctuation.

    Mikaela

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Thank-you for your positive, thoughtful, helpful comment.

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