I Agree with what you have written and think that it sad that the sea animals are dying because of the rubbish and plastic going into the sea. I think maybe next time you could look and see if you have repeated the same message in different sentences as you are repeating a lot of the same thing. Thank you for commenting on our school blogs. We hope you have enjoyed doing this. Merry Christmas and hope you have happy holidays and stay safe.
I Agree with what you have written and think that it sad that the sea animals are dying because of the rubbish and plastic going into the sea.
ReplyDeleteI think maybe next time you could look and see if you have repeated the same message in different sentences as you are repeating a lot of the same thing.
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