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Friday, 26 October 2018
Show not Tell writing
5.4.3.2.1 i leaped out of the plane i am trying to get my team together.
I looked down and saw the pattern of the land getting larger when we get closer and closer to the land.Me and my teammates could hear the air pasting us and the whirling of the motor of the plane the propellor spinning as well as the sound of the people down below. My teammates and i could feel the air pushing on our suits butterflies sick in our tummes if the parachute didn't open i would dye
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