Kia Ora Zara and Gaitau, As I read your slides I found it very helpful to read the question first as it guided my reading. Great surprise with the photos of our local war memorials. Thanks
Kia Ora Zara and Gaitau, I'm sari from parkview parua school. I really liked the way that you asked questions and then answered them straight away. I also liked how you put pictures of war memorials at the end. Maybe next time you could put pictures with the writing instead of in slides after them. Your story reminds me of when my grandma got out all the old drawings and pictures of my great granddad in the war. -Sari
Kia ora Zara, I am Rebekah from Parkview parua school. I really like how you told us lots of different things that the woman did. I also like how you focused it on woman. I think if you maybe added what some of the illnesses where called and how they affected the soldiers would make it a little more interesting. -Rebekah
Kia Ora Zara and Gaitau,
ReplyDeleteAs I read your slides I found it very helpful to read the question first as it guided my reading. Great surprise with the photos of our local war memorials. Thanks
Kia Ora Zara and Gaitau,
ReplyDeleteI'm sari from parkview parua school. I really liked the way that you asked questions and then answered them straight away. I also liked how you put pictures of war memorials at the end. Maybe next time you could put pictures with the writing instead of in slides after them. Your story reminds me of when my grandma got out all the old drawings and pictures of my great granddad in the war.
-Sari
Thank you Sari and Miss B for commenting a positive,Helpful and thoughtful comment
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ReplyDeleteI am Rebekah from Parkview parua school. I really like how you told us lots of different things that the woman did. I also like how you focused it on woman. I think if you maybe added what some of the illnesses where called and how they affected the soldiers would make it a little more interesting.
-Rebekah
Thank you Rebekah for the helpful, positive and thoughtful comment
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