Hi Zara i think that your writing is very good at expressing what the feeling is, but my eye sights quite bad so if i see this from far away i cannot really make out the words because of the Font and Colors of the background. - Jorgen
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Hi Zara, it's Peter. I like the angry one, it would be scary to have someone with that description looking at you. Next time you could reread and make sure it makes sense. I think your emotion is frustration, can you gees my one? Peter😀😎😈
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Dear Zara,
ReplyDeleteDefinitely you have used show not tell. Please do write using correct spelling so we can appreciate your writing easily. Miss B
Hi Zara
ReplyDeletei think that your writing is very good at expressing what the feeling is,
but my eye sights quite bad so if i see this from far away i cannot really make out the words because of the Font and Colors of the background. - Jorgen
hi Zara
ReplyDeletei think it is cool but you could correct your spelling os i can reed it
by stella
Thank you Miss B,Jorgen and stella for the feedback that you gave me about my post and also thank you for commenting a Positive, Helpful and thoughtful comment
ReplyDeleteHi Zara, it's Peter. I like the angry one, it would be scary to have someone with that description looking at you. Next time you could reread and make sure it makes sense. I think your emotion is frustration, can you gees my one?
ReplyDeletePeter😀😎😈
Thank you Peter for the feedback that you gave me on my post and also thank you for commenting a Positive, Helpful and thoughtful comment and you guessed my emotion and it was correct.
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