Friday 18 August 2017

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Zara's Space Writing


"Oh no"
As l look , out of  the space cruiser , I see darkness , yellow crunchy slime all over
the ground of the planet.Then I go to the other side of the planet with my space cruiser ,  all I can  see is dead aliens, blue  and red blood all over the ground I feel like I am going to get back on my space cruiser ,  go back to earth because it is so gross  I didn’t want to touch the ground because it but I can’t go back to earth just yet because  I have not colonized the planet yet I  should start now , then I go off ,I go and find somewhere to start but i don’t know where i am going to start saturn side or the uranus side , the aliens are not happy when they are having a war but when the war is finish the aliens are happy , there is a big problem because we don’t want the blue aliens on our planet and the blue aliens want the planet because it looks like a blueberry.  They are blue too and next minute i hear a big bang
“ What was that ?“ jessica said
“ it was a  new space cruiser” bob said
“ ok bob thanks for letting me know “ jessica said

Bob went to go and look who it was and it was people from earth and that was the end of the story because the jessica had to go back to earth and bob the alien died because the people put sleep Medicine in bob’s mouth he can never wake up