Kia ora, Ruby and Zara I really liked how you choose yellow to write on because it goes well with your other colors and it stands out. Maybe next time you could make your writing darker so it's easier to see . I also wanted to know if you drew the pictures around the poster. Thanks Chloe
Kia ora Ruby and Zara, I'm from Parkview Parua School. I really like how you want to help save sea life in the ocean because most of the creatures in the ocean are eating plastic and are now dead because of it. Maybe next time you could add some more info about it. Overall I really liked it. -Alyssa
Hello Ruby and Zara,
ReplyDeleteGreat effort I love the bubbles they make an impact because you have used a few well chosen words. From Principal B
Kia ora, Ruby and Zara I really liked how you choose yellow to write on because it goes well with your other colors and it stands out. Maybe next time you could make your writing darker so it's easier to see . I also wanted to know if you drew the pictures around the poster.
ReplyDeleteThanks Chloe
I did not draw to pictures around the poster and Thank you Mrs Bierings and Chloe for commenting on my blog.
ReplyDeleteKia ora Ruby and Zara,
ReplyDeleteI'm from Parkview Parua School. I really like how you want to help save sea life in the ocean because most of the creatures in the ocean are eating plastic and are now dead because of it. Maybe next time you could add some more info about it. Overall I really liked it.
-Alyssa