Kia Ora Zara, When I read your blog post I noticed a big improvement in the way you have expressed your ideas. You have constructed statements (sentences) which use connective words such as the word "after" and this helps your writing flow. Ka pai for a big improvement Zara.
Kia Ora Zara,
ReplyDeleteWhen I read your blog post I noticed a big improvement in the way you have expressed your ideas. You have constructed statements (sentences) which use connective words such as the word "after" and this helps your writing flow. Ka pai for a big improvement Zara.
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